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Post by The Breakdown 9/12/2010, 10:29 pm

WIP story. I will update at least once a week, and add on to it. Story so far:

LEGO citizens all woke up on a sunny morning. Many looked out at the bright, blue sky. While others went to get coffee. Many took showers, many took baths. Many brushed teeth, many got dressed. Only one minifig could not do all that under all his worries. Adam, the new President of LEGO Universe, had a big meeting to attend soon. His eyes were blood-shot, as much as his hair was messy. As he woke up, from his fifth attempted to stay awake at his table, he looked at the round white clock on the wall. "Oh my brickness! I'm going to be late!" So he just grabbed one of his PoP(Prince of Persia)tarts (with Prince Dastan on it this time) dumped on the kitchen counter with the many other snack pastries. Adam jumped into his Smart Car and went going.

When Adam appeared at the front of the LEGO Curators, Administrators, and High Office building, he noticed a sign on the newly-polished door, saying "DO NOT DISTURB, OR FACE LEGAL PUNISHMENT!", so he knew the meeting had started. "Studs1!" he murmured, knowing that even staff couldn't enter. But because he was staff, he knew the secret entrance; the statue of Mister Ole Kirk Christiansen2, the plaque could be removed, leading to a secret tunnel of stairs, leading to the old bunker/bomb shelter room, from when the government building was once a military base during BWII33. He opened the plaque on the base of the statue, and went down the stairs. "Uh, gross, cobwebs!" he exclaimed, for he was disgusted with clutter and disorderliness. When he finally met the secret room, someone was waiting for him, and that someone.....was his brother.

1 Studs-LEGO curse word
2 Ole Kirk Christiansen-Founder of LEGO
3 BWII-Brick War two, LEGO World war two

To be continued. FYI, this is inprov.



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Post by Brickfoot7 9/15/2010, 10:49 pm

I like how the story plot is going so far.
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Post by The Breakdown 9/16/2010, 12:36 am

Thanks! Smile
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Post by The Breakdown 9/20/2010, 9:24 pm

Sad i got only one comment. Sad
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Post by Henri da Flipper 9/20/2010, 9:36 pm

don't be, I was gonna comment saying it is good, but I didn't because I didn't understand exactly what this is... X Eyes
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Post by The Breakdown 9/21/2010, 12:27 am

You will later on. Tomorrow should hold yet another chapter!
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Post by Brickfoot7 9/21/2010, 2:10 am

The Empire wrote:You will later on. Tomorrow should hold yet another chapter!
My anticipation is building.
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Post by The Breakdown 9/22/2010, 1:27 am

I wasn't able to put it up. My life is getting busy, I barely have time to come on here! Scream 2
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Post by Brickfoot7 9/22/2010, 2:11 am

The Empire wrote:I wasn't able to put it up. My life is getting busy, I barely have time to come on here! Scream 2
You better make time.
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Post by The Breakdown 9/22/2010, 8:13 pm

Huh! That sounded like threat. Sad Just joking! Grin It'll be up soon.
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Post by Brickfoot7 9/22/2010, 8:16 pm

The Empire wrote:Huh! That sounded like threat. Sad Just joking! Grin It'll be up soon.
Maybe it was a threat. Evil 2
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Post by Octan 9/24/2010, 9:10 pm

This is very good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing a great story for us to enjoy! :classicsmile:
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Post by Brickfoot7 9/24/2010, 10:29 pm

I will die if you don't get the next part done over the weekend.
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Post by The Breakdown 9/24/2010, 10:36 pm

I will.....hopefully.
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Post by PerthPoke 10/4/2010, 4:10 pm

good going so far.
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Post by The Breakdown 10/4/2010, 10:57 pm

Thanks! Glad you active, pethpoke
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Post by PerthPoke 10/5/2010, 4:03 pm

The Empire wrote:Thanks! Glad you active, pethpoke
Active?this is only my 16th post in less then 2 days,not much if you ask me.
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Post by The Breakdown 10/5/2010, 8:39 pm

We're getting off-topic. Anyway. The next chapter!

When Adam appeared at the front of the LEGO Curators, Administrators, and High Office building, he noticed a sign on the newly-polished door, saying "DO NOT DISTURB, OR FACE LEGAL PUNISHMENT!", so he knew the meeting had started. "Studs1!" he murmured, knowing that even staff couldn't enter. But because he was staff, he knew the secret entrance; the statue of Mister Ole Kirk Christiansen2, the plaque could be removed, leading to a secret tunnel of stairs, leading to the old bunker/bomb shelter room, from when the government building was once a military base during BWII3. He opened the plaque on the base of the statue, and went down the stairs. "Uh, gross, cobwebs!" he exclaimed, for he was disgusted with clutter and disorderliness. When he finally met the secret room, someone was waiting for him, and that someone.....was his brother.

1 Studs-LEGO curse word
2 Ole Kirk Christiansen-Founder of LEGO
3 BWII-Brick War two, LEGO World war two
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Post by Octan 10/5/2010, 8:46 pm

YA!! A new chapter! I like where this story is going! And great lego reffrences!!

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Post by The Breakdown 10/5/2010, 8:48 pm

Thanks! I'll give you a sentence, or quote from the next chapter, if anyone know's who the brother is?!
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Post by Octan 10/5/2010, 8:57 pm

The Empire wrote:Thanks! I'll give you a sentence, or quote from the next chapter, if anyone know's who the brother is?!

Um... JCC!

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Post by The Breakdown 10/5/2010, 9:05 pm

You got it. Pm coming your way.
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Post by Octan 10/5/2010, 9:07 pm

The Empire wrote:You got it. Pm coming your way.
YAYAYYAYA!!! Did you send it yet?

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Post by The Breakdown 10/5/2010, 9:10 pm

Sent. Do not mention anything about the sentence I gave you.
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Post by Octan 10/5/2010, 9:12 pm

The Empire wrote:Sent. Do not mention anything about the sentence I gave you.
I won't! But can I say it was very good? Grin

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Post by The Breakdown 10/5/2010, 9:14 pm

Of course you can!
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Post by Octan 10/5/2010, 9:22 pm

The Empire wrote:Of course you can!
Then I will say: It was great, not what I expected at all! I loved it! Thanks

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Post by Brickfoot7 10/5/2010, 10:11 pm

Octan wrote:
The Empire wrote:Of course you can!
Then I will say: It was great, not what I expected at all! I loved it! Thanks

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It was JCC.
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Post by The Breakdown 10/6/2010, 10:40 am

Yes it was. But it was already said, sorry.
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Post by Brickfoot7 10/6/2010, 8:50 pm

The Empire wrote:Yes it was. But it was already said, sorry.
Darn. Crying
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Post by The Breakdown 10/7/2010, 1:02 am

It's okay, every time a chapter ends, I will ask a question. But only someone who hasn't won can guess. (It's only fair). After everyone's guessed, we refresh!
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Post by Brickfoot7 10/7/2010, 3:40 am

The Empire wrote:It's okay, every time a chapter ends, I will ask a question. But only someone who hasn't won can guess. (It's only fair). After everyone's guessed, we refresh!
So once you build all your B-day gifts, you can enjoy yourself for a week, then you will write next chapter.
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Post by The Breakdown 10/8/2010, 11:07 am

Yes. And I'm going to be enjoying myself a little more, I'm not going to be on as much for awhile.
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Post by JackDawson1010 4/24/2011, 11:30 pm

I kinda want another chapter, if it wouldn't be so rude...
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Post by PerthPoke 4/29/2011, 12:24 pm

Ok so it's JCC, is he made of MegaBlocks?
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